1. Taylor-Jayne
said to make my paragraph about the Asian international students longer and tie
in other ideas that could support it. She proposed that I expand each paragraph
and add more information overall. She suggested adding questions and personal
relations to my topic. I should include what type of learner I am. She added
that my quotes were very strong.
Rhett said to add page numbers in my in-text
citations. He also included that I should put personal example of learning
styles that I have experienced.
Brandon suggested I separate my paragraphs
into more clear ideas. He said I had lots of supporting details and
information.
2. The
most helpful piece of advice I received was to include personal details and
experiences about this topic. This will be fairly easy to include because I
have experience with learning styles before through a project I did in middle
school.
3. The
least helpful piece of advice I received was to put page numbers with my in-text
citations. This information was important but I’m more concerned with my
content and making sure I grouped ideas together properly.
4. For
revision, I will include page numbers in my in-text citations. I will also
include a paragraph at the end that has personal experiences and my own
opinions and questions. I will add more information to the paragraph about
international students and tie in information I already have to that paragraph
to make it longer and stronger.
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