1. The most helpful piece of advice I received was that my "analysis" paragraphs were focusing on what was being argued instead of how the author argued it. This helped drastically because it will change the focus of those paragraphs entirely.
2. The least helpful piece of advice received was grammatical errors. I appreciate this kind of correction but I value the other advice more that focuses on structure and content.
3. Will the grade received from this final draft be the very final grade or will I have another opportunity to revise and submit?
4. My plans for revision include moving the summary I put in other paragraphs to the appropriate paragraph. I will also revise my analysis to focus more on how the author argues his/her point rather than what they are arguing. I will edit parts of my paper that are informal, like contractions and certain sentences, to make them formal. I will edit grammatical errors that Megan pointed out. I will explain more thorough the arguments being made and support them with details. I will follow up the analysis paragraph with a section that includes the details of how I will use the information in my paper.
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