Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Final Drafts



1 comment:

  1. Dear Ivey,

    In your Annotated Bibliography, you have made your analysis significantly stronger. To continue pushing on your analysis, you can explain how the reader is affected by the writer’s techniques.

    In your Exploratory Essay, you made no revisions.

    In your Joining the Conversation piece, you updated your citations and some sentence level errors. Make sure to put your works cited on a new page.

    Megan

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