1. What was the most helpful piece of advice you received? Explain.
2. What was the least helpful piece of advice you received? Explain.
3. What questions do you have about Megan’s comments?
4. What are your plans for revision? Be specific. I should be able to understand exactly how your work will change in exactly which places.
1. The most helpful piece of advise was to find a better way to make my questions and sentences flow together. Instead of asking a question and then stating another sentence that is unrelated to the question, I need a sentence in between than joins the two.
2. There really wasn't a piece of advice that didn't help me in some way but if I had to pick the least helpful, it would be my MLA format corrections. I still appreciate the correction though!
3. I don't have any questions for Megan. I understand what she was critiquing about my piece and I realize what I can do to fix the problems.
4.
1) I will put "Throughout
the article on the American Montessori Society website..." instead of saying it was Montessori's article.
2) I plan on explaining how the younger children can learn better from the older children by the idea that the younger children never oppose to the idea of learning from their older peers.
3) I will capitalize the first letter of a quote I used from Montessori
4) I took out the sentence that started to answer my question I had asked
5) I added a phrase in between a question and another sentence to help them flow better
6) I changed the word "matured" to "surprised" to make my sentence more coherent
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